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-- Posted by beautifullydesigned at 1:39 pm on July 6, 2008
TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK : ) How come now I can't tell them why I love you. I open my mouth to speak and my words dance away like a stripper to a beat How come I can't say how I feel? It begins with a because he's just Or it's just the way he Then it just always ends with an I don't know Even if I reach deep down In my soul To find the words my feelings wouldn't truly show Because I need you to help me know I lost my inspiration the day I lost you Not a tear that I've cried Has a true explanation why they left my eyes They just know that I miss you But if I think real hard I can remember what I was thinking when I last kissed you And I know that your heart beats to fast And that you hate milk like I do And that you look at shooting stars [aww..lol] But why don't I know why I love you? I lost my inspiration the day I lost you All I know is that all the things I'll remember You've probably already forgotten And that I'm just some chick to you But since the day you left shit aint been right I lost my inspiration the day I lost you So don't ask me why I love you.
-- Posted by PeterNeedsHelp at 1:40 pm on July 6, 2008
i dont wanna read the whole thing..... im gonna say good job anyways
-- Posted by beautifullydesigned at 1:41 pm on July 6, 2008
Quote: from PeterNeedsHelp at 1:40 pm on July 6, 2008
i dont wanna read the whole thing..... im gonna say good job anyways
well that sucks but okay : )
-- Posted by Wakeupcall at 1:43 pm on July 6, 2008
You need paragraphs baby! But yeah, it's good. Comes from the heart...
-- Posted by piertangent at 1:44 pm on July 6, 2008
Quote: from Wakeupcall at 1:43 pm on July 6, 2008
You need paragraphs baby! But yeah, it's good. Comes from the heart...
Stanzas..
-- Posted by Cutierye at 1:48 pm on July 6, 2008
Great and who doesn't hate milk? It's awful.
-- Posted by beautifullydesigned at 1:50 pm on July 6, 2008
Quote: from Cutierye at 1:48 pm on July 6, 2008
Great and who doesn't hate milk? It's awful.
yeah i know it's disgusting but i know lotsof ppl who consume it like AIR lol
-- Posted by ajmcal at 1:15 pm on July 8, 2008
I've been selected as an ambassador for Childline, to tell you about this great new competition. The idea is that you have to write 100 words on something that matters to you. This can be anything from friends to music to your dog! And that's only about 8 lines of writing! Celebrities like Taio Cruz, Kirsty Gallagher, Rick Edwards, Zezi Ifore and Nick Hornby are also participating because this is such a great cause! Plus if you win, you get a years supply of penguin books and your text published If you want to enter, you can at www.spinebreakers.co.uk/Competitions/Pages/papercuts.aspx x
-- Posted by beautifullydesigned at 1:44 pm on July 8, 2008
Quote: from ajmcal at 1:15 pm on July 8, 2008
I've been selected as an ambassador for Childline, to tell you about this great new competition. The idea is that you have to write 100 words on something that matters to you. This can be anything from friends to music to your dog! And that's only about 8 lines of writing! Celebrities like Taio Cruz, Kirsty Gallagher, Rick Edwards, Zezi Ifore and Nick Hornby are also participating because this is such a great cause! Plus if you win, you get a years supply of penguin books and your text published If you want to enter, you can at www.spinebreakers.co.uk/Competitions/Pages/papercuts.aspx x 
thanks..maybe i will.
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