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-- Posted by beautifullydesigned at 1:39 pm on July 6, 2008

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK  : )


How come now I can't tell them why I love you.
I open my mouth to speak and my words dance away like a stripper to a beat
How come I can't say how I feel?
It begins with a because he's just
Or it's  just the way he
Then it just always ends with an I don't know
Even if I reach deep down In my soul  
To find the words my feelings wouldn't truly show
Because  I need you to help me know
I lost my inspiration the day I lost you
Not a tear that I've cried
Has a true explanation why they left my eyes
They  just know that I miss you
But if I think real hard I can remember what I was thinking when I last kissed you
And  I know that  your heart beats to fast
And that you hate milk like I do
And that you look at shooting stars [aww..lol]
But why don't I know why I love you?
I lost my inspiration the day I lost you
All I know is that all the things I'll remember
You've probably already forgotten
And that I'm just some chick to you
But  since the day you left shit aint been right
I lost my inspiration the day I lost you
So don't ask me why I love you.


-- Posted by PeterNeedsHelp at 1:40 pm on July 6, 2008

i dont wanna read the whole thing..... im gonna say good job anyways


-- Posted by beautifullydesigned at 1:41 pm on July 6, 2008

Quote: from PeterNeedsHelp at 1:40 pm on July 6, 2008


i dont wanna read the whole thing..... im gonna say good job anyways

well that sucks but okay : )


-- Posted by Wakeupcall at 1:43 pm on July 6, 2008

You need paragraphs baby! But yeah, it's good. Comes from the heart...


-- Posted by piertangent at 1:44 pm on July 6, 2008

Quote: from Wakeupcall at 1:43 pm on July 6, 2008


You need paragraphs baby! But yeah, it's good. Comes from the heart...

Stanzas..


-- Posted by Cutierye at 1:48 pm on July 6, 2008

Great and who doesn't hate milk? It's awful.


-- Posted by beautifullydesigned at 1:50 pm on July 6, 2008

Quote: from Cutierye at 1:48 pm on July 6, 2008


Great and who doesn't hate milk? It's awful.

yeah i know it's disgusting
but i know lotsof ppl who consume it like AIR lol


-- Posted by ajmcal at 1:15 pm on July 8, 2008

I've been selected as an ambassador for Childline, to tell you about this great new competition. The idea is that you have to write 100 words on something that matters to you. This can be anything from friends to music to your dog! And that's only about 8 lines of writing! Celebrities like Taio Cruz, Kirsty Gallagher, Rick Edwards, Zezi Ifore and Nick Hornby are also participating because this is such a great cause!

Plus if you win, you get a years supply of penguin books and your text published
If you want to enter, you can at www.spinebreakers.co.uk/Competitions/Pages/papercuts.aspx

x


-- Posted by beautifullydesigned at 1:44 pm on July 8, 2008

Quote: from ajmcal at 1:15 pm on July 8, 2008


I've been selected as an ambassador for Childline, to tell you about this great new competition. The idea is that you have to write 100 words on something that matters to you. This can be anything from friends to music to your dog! And that's only about 8 lines of writing! Celebrities like Taio Cruz, Kirsty Gallagher, Rick Edwards, Zezi Ifore and Nick Hornby are also participating because this is such a great cause!

Plus if you win, you get a years supply of penguin books and your text published
If you want to enter, you can at www.spinebreakers.co.uk/Competitions/Pages/papercuts.aspx  

x


thanks..maybe i will.


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