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-- Posted by PrinceStatus at 12:40 pm on July 12, 2008

i'm not quite finshed with it, but tell me what you think anyway  

Watch the sun
As it beams, can make ice cry
Like sadness
Can bring forth, tears to our eye
We are young
Share our toys, then find them broke
We are old
Give our hearts... already spoke

Watch the snow
As it falls, can cover truth
Like a lie
When spoken, through tongue and tooth


-- Posted by Joker31 at 12:41 pm on July 12, 2008

That sounds extremely gay.  


-- Posted by HatesYou at 12:43 pm on July 12, 2008

For some reason, every poem i've read on LW is quite depressing.
I wanna make my own poem.
Something like.

Suck my cock.
Suck it hard.
Suck it now.
Let's drink and smoke.

CHYEA.


-- Posted by Human Nature at 12:44 pm on July 12, 2008

Its interesting


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