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-- Posted by rawr41507 at 7:02 am on July 31, 2008

which one do you think is  better? & why/what do you like about it??

Chris, darlin
I havent seen your face in forever
It kills me
And I haven't heard your amazing voice in so long
I miss it like crazy
And what I really miss
October first
Everything was a huge disaster
But as I was crying
And the world went up in flames around us
Things were so perfect.
Perfect cause I was with you.
It was the perfect disaster.

-or-

I love you babe
I really do
But this distance is terrible
I miss you
and this pain is almost unbearable
But I deal with it
because you mean the world to me
And I'll admit
I'm afraid I'll never see
you ever again
And that is what keeps me up so late
every night.
I'll love you forever darling.


-- Posted by Tigerhawk at 7:05 am on July 31, 2008

First one is better...


-- Posted by SophFairy at 7:06 am on July 31, 2008

First.


-- Posted by albinna at 7:11 am on July 31, 2008

i like the first one.


-- Posted by Four King Ace at 7:14 am on July 31, 2008

I prefer the second one


-- Posted by paperskyx at 7:14 am on July 31, 2008

First....


-- Posted by Mattie17 at 7:15 am on July 31, 2008

Like both. but i voted second


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