LiveWire Peer Support Network

Printable Version of Topic "Corny?????"

- LiveWire Teen Forums & College Forums (http://www.golivewire.com)
-- (http://www.golivewire.com/forums/support-teen.html)
--- Short Stories & Poetry (http://www.golivewire.com/forums/forum-11-s-0.html)
---- Corny????? (http://www.golivewire.com/forums/peer-yansoon-support-a.html)


-- Posted by Anonymous at 10:43 pm on Aug. 3, 2008

As we talked today I found I broke your heart
In such away it tore me apart
I stole your soul and now it's into
Hurry up we need glue
I can't change the past
I won't even try
As I lay here and write you thought make me cry
I know you hurt but don't say bye
Help me change push me to reach for the sky
Love from you is enough to make me high
These feelings make me think I can fly
Thanks to you I don't want to die
As the day go by I'll continue to try
A day with you as friend is leaving a love sick puppy to die


-- Posted by loner asian at 10:45 pm on Aug. 3, 2008

very very corny


-- Posted by JamesBrauman at 10:48 pm on Aug. 3, 2008

It wouldnt be so corny if all the lines didn't rhyme.


-- Posted by Anonymous at 10:51 pm on Aug. 3, 2008

its supposed to be corny!!! i dont want it to be TOOO corny tho


www.golivewire.com