-- Posted by Anonymous at 10:59 pm on Aug. 3, 2008 i have the full version wrote down but i dont have it with me but the whole poem has the same begining lines (the,and,in,is)but it all makes sense but plz tell me what u think of this first lil part. the pull of a trigger and the drop of a pill in the hands of a man is the power to kill the abuse of a child and the house of dysfuntion in the life of a child is the path for corruption -- Posted by crazy4you at 10:59 pm on Aug. 3, 2008 Sounds good to me -- Posted by HXC at 11:00 pm on Aug. 3, 2008 sounds like lyrics to a bad death metal song. EDIT: on second thought, bad death metal song was redundant. -- Posted by MaddiJune at 11:00 pm on Aug. 3, 2008 sad, true, good...2 thumbs up :) -- Posted by acausedelle at 11:01 pm on Aug. 3, 2008 Quote: from HXC at 1:00 am on Aug. 4, 2008 sounds like lyrics to a bad death metal song. Basically. Sounds like something Origin would make. -- Posted by Bi Kris at 11:01 pm on Aug. 3, 2008 very nice.  getting the beginning word to match can get hard in later verses but these are good. -- Posted by isabelle demetri at 11:01 pm on Aug. 3, 2008 sound sorta like the beginning of a Disturbed song.  Kudos, I like it. -- Posted by LoveAlwaysAndi at 11:01 pm on Aug. 3, 2008 Quote: from Anonymous at 1:59 am on Aug. 4, 2008 i have the full version wrote down but i dont have it with me but the whole poem has the same begining lines (the,and,in,is)but it all makes sense but plz tell me what u think of this first lil part. the pull of a trigger   and the drop of a pill in the hands of a man   is the power to kill the abuse of a child and the house of dysfuntion in the life of a child   is the path for corruption i think you should PM me the whole thing -- Posted by thegirlandhermachine at 11:02 pm on Aug. 3, 2008 it's pretty good . -- Posted by Djs971 at 11:03 pm on Aug. 3, 2008 cool -- Posted by kattyy at 11:03 pm on Aug. 3, 2008 Quote: from MaddiJune at 2:00 am on Aug. 4, 2008 sad, true, good...2 thumbs up :) same here