-- Posted by ezacxveronica22 at 6:19 am on Aug. 4, 2008 Underneath underneath that smile lies a broken heart, that is tired...so tired of being ripped apart Underneath the laughter, lies hurt and pain, the kind that time cannot heal or tame. Underneath the strenght you see lies fear embedded in the kinda you grasp tightly and find hard to set free. Underneath that grown body, there is a small child still struggling to be a man not sure of where to go or who to be. underneath the harshness, lies a warm loving heart, wanting so much to be loved and not left behind. ii want you to be you let it out let it show for the whole world to see release your your fears your broken dreams bottled anxieties, and all of your hidden tear. (zac) so tell me what you thing hate it or love it or even relate to it....... -- Posted by Eos at 6:21 am on Aug. 4, 2008 Deep man. Deep. *nods* -- Posted by Distance is Darkness at 6:21 am on Aug. 4, 2008 LOVE eeeet -- Posted by SavannahNoel at 6:21 am on Aug. 4, 2008 I like it :) -- Posted by motorhead113 at 6:22 am on Aug. 4, 2008 I like it. 'Tis deep, and reminds me of a friend. -- Posted by dragonking at 6:22 am on Aug. 4, 2008 It's pretty good.  It's spelled strength.  One part seemed to not sound correct so you should reword it. Underneath the strenght you see lies fear embedded in the kinda you grasp tightly and find hard to set free. -- Posted by Dragonfang93 at 6:24 am on Aug. 4, 2008 That was beautiful. -- Posted by SUPER SEXY CHICK at 6:25 am on Aug. 4, 2008 i like it -- Posted by its only me again at 6:42 am on Aug. 4, 2008 very good