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-- Posted by just me101 at 7:10 pm on Aug. 17, 2008

The Sheriff

He's a man who is dedicated
To his Deputies,
The citizens of Beckham County,
And to his family

He's a man who has a vision
A vision for the future of Beckham County,
A vision to continue and fight crime,
And a vision to build up the department

He's a man who is a leader
He leads his Deputies,
He leads his department,
And he leads to make Beckham County a safe place

He's a man
Who is dedicated,
Who has a vision,
And who is a leader

By: Hayle C.
August 5, 2008


-- Posted by Micus at 7:14 pm on Aug. 17, 2008

Why do you switch from He's in the first three stanzas to He is in the last stanza?


-- Posted by just me101 at 7:15 pm on Aug. 17, 2008

Quote: from Micus at 7:14 pm on Aug. 17, 2008


Why do you switch from He's in the first three stanzas to He is in the last stanza?

Didn't realize I had done that...I have trouble when I proof read because I automatically read it as He's


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