-- Posted by mackenzie13 at 8:17 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 i wrote this when i was 12.. it seems so cliche to write about tears, but it's what i feel, what i fear they pour down my face just like a river, they give me goosebumps make me shiver even though it's over, i still wish there could be us feel all that care all that trust i keep hoping it will be you when i pick up the phone but the deed is done, the seed has been sown all that i wrote in this poem is true, even this last line: i love you -- Posted by ashleyacid at 8:17 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 I hate it. -- Posted by acausedelle at 8:17 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 It seems too mundane. -- Posted by hooray for rootbeer at 8:18 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 i hate it. -- Posted by HXC at 8:18 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 lame. -- Posted by hI jAMES at 8:19 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 Its decent. -- Posted by Lihiro at 8:19 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 Lameish. But don't we all hate poems we wrote when we were 12? I CRINGE at mine. -- Posted by jamesshadowwolf at 8:20 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 he im a guy and for a 12 year old that was pritty good.  dont lisen to the others puttign you down. they probly just people who think ohh its a poem... -- Posted by dragonking at 8:30 pm on Aug. 18, 2008 It's good for a 12 year old to have wrote. -- Posted by Velico112 at 8:39 am on Aug. 19, 2008 excellent