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-- Posted by iwantcandy at 1:13 pm on Aug. 19, 2008

Now he has me thinking,
about the first time our eyes met.
and how the hours went by like minutes,
but the shadows never left.
now i start to realize..
that those shadows will always stay.
and as long as i still love you,
they will never go away.

-- Posted by its only me at 1:14 pm on Aug. 19, 2008

awwww thats really good and well written. i write a lot too

-- Posted by SpM at 1:14 pm on Aug. 19, 2008

I didn't love it, but it wasn't half bad.

-- Posted by Eos at 1:15 pm on Aug. 19, 2008

i liked it.
Deep man, deep.

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