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-- Posted by starrynight401 at 9:14 am on Aug. 20, 2008

Some suggestions please? And critiques. The one area that really bothers me is the white set of little flowers they aren't quite burned in enough they are too stark white...


Hummingbird moth


-- Posted by hadouken at 9:15 am on Aug. 20, 2008

yea, i agree, the contrast is a bit off, but this is still pretty cool


-- Posted by Alabamarama at 9:16 am on Aug. 20, 2008

It's nice, but it's not really sharp, even in the foreground.


-- Posted by tropicalbreezze2 at 9:16 am on Aug. 20, 2008

I'm a photographer too :)

Umm I like the whole concept and the fact that you caught a hummingbird is amazing! But I think that they humming bird is a little blurry and out of focus even though he is supposed to be the focal point and centerpiece of the picture. Also I agree with your own critique that the white flowers at the top are too stark white


-- Posted by RockerTori106 at 9:17 am on Aug. 20, 2008

It should be sharper, I think.


-- Posted by piertangent at 9:17 am on Aug. 20, 2008

What camera are you using?


-- Posted by The Fantasy at 9:18 am on Aug. 20, 2008

Its good, but more sharpness.


-- Posted by tropicalbreezze2 at 9:19 am on Aug. 20, 2008

try using a macro lense


-- Posted by starrynight401 at 9:19 am on Aug. 20, 2008

It's a canon film slr and yeah the the hummingbird moth became blurry because I didn't have the speed high enough because I just caught him before he flew away so I didn't have time to adjust my settings.


-- Posted by psychotickid555 at 9:26 am on Aug. 20, 2008

crop the white photos out. they look like there was a fluffy on your lens


-- Posted by tennisplayerV2 at 9:28 am on Aug. 20, 2008

awesome


-- Posted by starrynight401 at 9:36 am on Aug. 20, 2008

Quote: from tropicalbreezze2 at 9:19 am on Aug. 20, 2008


try using a macro lense

Oh I wish I just can't afford one just yet.


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