-- Posted by The Artful Dodger at 9:16 pm on Sep. 3, 2008 Changed worlds From the first to the third And back again, confused I put my thoughts into words Experience in life; all brought into words Sought freedom and I found it Now I'm lost, like a bird Flying free, over the sea Soaring over new places Never knowing where I'm going Or which direction I'm facing Those people on the ground They take it for granted That support beneath their feet Of all the things they were granted I perch on a mountain looking down Into valleys with men Searching for the future And see nothing resembling an end Does your loyalty lie In yourself or your family Or the very men who instigate The hate-based insanity? __________________ Yeah; my boys took me to a real studio for the first time today (the owner is a producer name Gee Slang). I wrote it in the morning during class and just spat. We got a beat and everything. That's my verse I set it off. 3 hours  of recording, mxin an blunts. Wanted the whole thing for myself (so I could write more). I'll post it for people to pick apart when its completely mixed down but what do u think of the lyrics? Does it come off as deep? Thats how its supposed to. An a lil' bit obscure/abstract so alot's open to interpretation. -- Posted by calvin47383 at 9:18 pm on Sep. 3, 2008 decent... -- Posted by Frubeling at 7:19 am on Sep. 4, 2008 Sung in what style? -- Posted by The Artful Dodger at 4:10 pm on Sep. 4, 2008 Quote: from Frubeling at 7:19 am on Sep. 4, 2008 Sung in what style? Rapped. As for who I'm biting flow wise (I have a feeling you don't listen to rap. please prove me wrong); NaS, Pac, Joe Budden...course I'm not near as nice as any of those guys.   -- Posted by Frubeling at 9:38 am on Sep. 5, 2008 Quote: from The Artful Dodger at 12:10 am on Sep. 5, 2008 Quote: from Frubeling at 7:19 am on Sep. 4, 2008 Sung in what style? Rapped. As for who I'm biting flow wise (I have a feeling you don't listen to rap. please prove me wrong); NaS, Pac, Joe Budden...course I'm not near as nice as any of those guys. I know who they are, but your'e right, I dont listen to rap -- Posted by ludlight at 10:35 am on Sep. 5, 2008 not bad