-- Posted by CherryxBomb at 5:43 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 I'm supposed to write about my experiences with the 9/11 attacks in NY, since I lived there at the time, and I need to come up with a kick-ass intro for it. I don't know what I'm going to write, I'm a good writer but I'm not inspired right now. And i don't wanna scar myself even more by watching the attacks on youtube over and over again. Can someone please help me? I need to have a GREAT intro because that's what we're concentrating on in class right now.   -- Posted by A Milli at 5:44 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Don't force shit.  I'll admit 9/11 did not phase me and I live in New York. -- Posted by Bitner at 5:45 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 just write about how violated it made you feel. -- Posted by LittleItaly at 5:45 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 start off with a deatiled description/ attention grabber, like it was a normal morning, or so i thought...and continue or start with a quote about 9/11 -- Posted by bassguitarplayer2010 at 5:45 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Hey mg me I got some great stuff enough to get you an A++++ -- Posted by MystiqueBeauty16 at 5:45 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 "Have you ever wondered what it would feel like to have your whole life torn apart in a matter of a few short minutes?" -- Posted by JennyColada at 5:45 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Not that you have to use my idea, of course, but I'm thinking an interesting way to start it could be to say something like: I've never thought that one moment, one second, one idea could change my life forever. Not sure where I'd take it after that though. -- Posted by hI jAMES at 5:45 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 On a cold semptember morning, not a rat was running, came... I tried.   -- Posted by basketball5 at 5:46 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 start with:::: Painting a Picture             ::::Asking a Question            :::: Dialogue (maybe the new on television?)           :::::Using a Definition(terriosim,meaning of 911,etc.) -- Posted by jdjack92 at 5:50 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Quote: from A Milli at 5:44 pm on Sep. 8, 2008 Don't force shit.  I'll admit 9/11 did not phase me and I live in New York. Wow you're just a tough mother fucker arent you? All your answers show you're a tough guy.