-- Posted by TechnoShark at 5:27 pm on Sep. 11, 2008 I already posted this, but I want opinions this time. I wouldn't say I'm much of a writer. Churned this out in about 15 minutes. --- That rhythm beats so furiously within your heart And that heat vibrates from your fingertips Because you shredded your mask years ago You drifted deeper with me as I sank to black waters Whispered lullabies as storms crashed above our heads Breathed life back through my bruised lips and lungs As my heart still beats, though weakly As my ears still hear, though muffled My love grows deeper like the roots Of the oak tree where we lived -- Posted by Louiise at 5:31 pm on Sep. 11, 2008 very good, i liked it.