-- Posted by Anonymous at 7:08 am on Sep. 14, 2008 Well, nevermind guys. Apparently, it sucks. -- Posted by The Fantasy at 7:08 am on Sep. 14, 2008 Stryker is an odd name. -- Posted by Permious at 7:09 am on Sep. 14, 2008 "then you shall have me" i stopped reading after that. jesus fucking christ -- Posted by Anonymous at 7:09 am on Sep. 14, 2008 Quote: from The Fantasy at 7:08 am on Sep. 14, 2008 Stryker is an odd name. True. That's not the point though, lol. Everything is subject to change at this point. I just need to know whether or not I did well with the scene. -- Posted by guitar lover at 7:10 am on Sep. 14, 2008 first and for most before i read any ferther TOO MUCH Stryker this alexa this stryker this alexa this -- Posted by alastrxxna at 7:10 am on Sep. 14, 2008 Hot. -- Posted by Anonymous at 7:11 am on Sep. 14, 2008 Quote: from guitar lover at 7:10 am on Sep. 14, 2008 first and for most before i read any ferther TOO MUCH Stryker this alexa this stryker this alexa this Alright. I can change that. What should I say instead? "He? She?" -- Posted by RIMHfire at 7:12 am on Sep. 14, 2008 Stryker is a stupid name. -- Posted by SpM at 7:13 am on Sep. 14, 2008 Haha, "drinking in his six ridges"? Your word choice is bizarre and your writing is just awkward to read. No flow. -- Posted by guitar lover at 7:14 am on Sep. 14, 2008 still say there names and everything just not all the time like look at a book and see how much they say he or she cause i know they don't say the name all the time. but then don't use he she all the time you know? -- Posted by K r e s c e n d o at 7:17 am on Sep. 14, 2008 It's okay [: -- Posted by guitar lover at 7:18 am on Sep. 14, 2008 don't give up now its good but you just need some few fix ups. don't give up :( pm me if you want some help i know i could help you -- Posted by St Jimmy at 7:20 am on Sep. 14, 2008 Blah. I couldn't read it because you had CHANGED it