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-- Posted by cadetjones2011 at 10:37 am on Sep. 20, 2008
ok so I wrote this poem for me and my boyfriend "Far Away" We may live far away But we know that our love will always stay You have stolen my heart And it kills me the whole time we are apart But just knowing how much you love me You have set my soul free Everyday I feel your pain And I know it's the worst kind of stain But just know that you will always be a part of me So can't you see All I ever needed was you I know you are true And will never turn my world to blue I am so glad you are in my life And one day we shall become husband and wife And when that special day comes our hearts will finally intertwine By:Jessica Jones
-- Posted by xXxRiotxXx at 10:39 am on Sep. 20, 2008
Cold fear I know that your here Don't lie to me What the fuck did you think? That I would forgive you? Be your best friend? Just go away And let this shit end That's the last poem I wrote. And yes, I like yours.
-- Posted by HangEmHigh at 10:39 am on Sep. 20, 2008
Awww that's really sweet =)
-- Posted by cadetjones2011 at 10:41 am on Sep. 20, 2008
Quote: from HangEmHigh at 10:39 am on Sep. 20, 2008
Awww that's really sweet =)
thanks
-- Posted by cadetjones2011 at 10:41 am on Sep. 20, 2008
Quote: from xXxRiotxXx at 10:39 am on Sep. 20, 2008
Cold fear I know that your here Don't lie to me What the fuck did you think? That I would forgive you? Be your best friend? Just go away And let this shit end That's the last poem I wrote. And yes, I like yours. 
thanks and your poem is good to
-- Posted by breannafhchick06 at 10:52 am on Sep. 20, 2008
very nice
-- Posted by sadnessness at 10:56 am on Sep. 20, 2008
yeah its nice actually
-- Posted by cadetjones2011 at 1:04 pm on Sep. 20, 2008
Quote: from sadnessness at 10:56 am on Sep. 20, 2008
yeah its nice actually
thanks
-- Posted by KathyN at 2:47 pm on Sep. 20, 2008
Any poem is good if it expresses feelings and you can understand or/and identify with them.
-- Posted by cadetjones2011 at 3:59 pm on Sep. 20, 2008
Quote: from KathyN at 2:47 pm on Sep. 20, 2008
Any poem is good if it expresses feelings and you can understand or/and identify with them.
thanks
-- Posted by cadetjones2011 at 4:40 am on Sep. 27, 2008
Quote: from breannafhchick06 at 10:52 am on Sep. 20, 2008
very nice
thanks
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