-- Posted by DayXTripper at 7:57 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 "You are what you eat." Granted this saying is old and cliché, but the reality is that food can serve as an identity for people. Topic sentence...I'm stuck, I hate this essay -- Posted by ohhithere at 7:58 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 Eat healthy, you taste healthy if you..catch my drift. lulz. -- Posted by Hi Carie at 7:58 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 so food is identity. why do you think that? how is that manifested? what are your examples? what are your key points. I know no one wants to hear this,but I have found outlines are very helpful. just list all the things you might like to say and then sort them. post them here, we can help. -- Posted by 4irate at 7:59 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 If you enjoy fatty foods, you tend to be heavier, while the veggies lovers pass off and stay slim? IDK, I suck.. -- Posted by nerevarine692 at 7:59 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 Lol... funny thoughts came to mind. -- Posted by Tavis at 7:59 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 I eat chick magnets. Nommy. -- Posted by tell me again at 7:59 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 Give a few examples of how food "serves as an identity for people". Then go from there. -- Posted by blitzerdog at 8:00 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 Maybe If you eat healthy, most people are on top of their lives meaning their in good shape, look out for their health and are good samaritans and citizens for the world if you eat like a slob you don't care about your physical appearance or how you eat. You live life to the fullest and are free. (first thoughts that came through my head) -- Posted by Boondox at 8:03 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 Quote: from barnabas at 7:58 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 so food is identity. why do you think that? how is that manifested? what are your examples?   what are your key points. I know no one wants to hear this,but I have found outlines are very helpful. just list all the things you might like to say and then sort them. post them here, we can help. i agree, outlines are very helpful -- Posted by medjai at 8:35 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 I only concerned myself with following formula in timed essays, and even then, I was very liberal with it. This essay is an assignment, meaning you have all night or longer to finish it. Don't worry about the topic sentence, you can change it later a your leisure. Write this essay on the way we change our eating habits based on how much sex we're getting and based on whether or not we're having sex with multiple partners, on whether or not your partner/s is/are sexually open to oral and anal, and whether or not you're having kinky sex. That may be too much so just go with frequency of sex, whether or not that sex is with one or multiple partners, and whether or not you feel you have a future with one of the sexual partners. That's good meat for a full essay. This will be the most creative essay out of everyone else using that same prompt (or likely any other prompt) and will guarantee you bonus points with your teacher. I don't recommend getting illicit but I personally would. If your classmates find out you did this  they'll think more highly of you giving you an avenue of approach toward solving whatever social issues you may have as well. Write this essay without worrying about structure, after you write the essay, print it out and cut each paragraph into it's own slice of paper and reorganize it, then re-write it with the essay you just re ordered in front of you, making sure to accommodate formatting requirements. Print three copies and save it to your computer. You will get an A on this essay. When you leave class, tape it on your teacher's door. Some curious person will read the beginning, realize what it is, and see that you got an A, and then soon a shitload of people will know. You will have not only impressed your teacher and your peers, you will talked about among all your teachers. This is always a good thing. Remember, address the subject completely seriously, if you aren't actually sexually active, lie but be logical about it. 1. Write essay on the subject medjai gave you. 2. Follow instructions. 3. ?????????????????????????????????? 4. Profit. -- Posted by DayXTripper at 8:39 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 hahaha.. medjai, you topic is looking more appealing with each alcoholic drink -- Posted by medjai at 8:45 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 I am here to help! Ignore these busybodies and trust me, this shit will work. -- Posted by ilovethatbiotch at 10:25 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 how about coffee drinks. i am a quadshot + a day and a busy body. or people who pack the same lunch every day are predictable in life. stuff like that... -- Posted by medjai at 10:47 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 I feel that your idea is exactly what every other student would be doing, ilovethatbiotch. -- Posted by tell me again at 1:49 pm on Sep. 22, 2008 Quote: from medjai at 8:35 pm on Sep. 21, 2008 I only concerned myself with following formula in timed essays, and even then, I was very liberal with it. This essay is an assignment, meaning you have all night or longer to finish it. Don't worry about the topic sentence, you can change it later a your leisure. Write this essay on the way we change our eating habits based on how much sex we're getting and based on whether or not we're having sex with multiple partners, on whether or not your partner/s is/are sexually open to oral and anal, and whether or not you're having kinky sex. That may be too much so just go with frequency of sex, whether or not that sex is with one or multiple partners, and whether or not you feel you have a future with one of the sexual partners. That's good meat for a full essay. This will be the most creative essay out of everyone else using that same prompt (or likely any other prompt) and will guarantee you bonus points with your teacher. I don't recommend getting illicit but I personally would. If your classmates find out you did this  they'll think more highly of you giving you an avenue of approach toward solving whatever social issues you may have as well. Write this essay without worrying about structure, after you write the essay, print it out and cut each paragraph into it's own slice of paper and reorganize it, then re-write it with the essay you just re ordered in front of you, making sure to accommodate formatting requirements. Print three copies and save it to your computer. You will get an A on this essay. When you leave class, tape it on your teacher's door. Some curious person will read the beginning, realize what it is, and see that you got an A, and then soon a shitload of people will know. You will have not only impressed your teacher and your peers, you will talked about among all your teachers. This is always a good thing. Remember, address the subject completely seriously, if you aren't actually sexually active, lie but be logical about it. 1. Write essay on the subject medjai gave you. 2. Follow instructions. 3. ?????????????????????????????????? 4. Profit. Sounds way too advanced.