-- Posted by Hey Jewlee at 11:02 am on Sep. 27, 2008 They turn and begin to walk away from each other her to the metro station him to the cafe where he works past the drunks clutching bottles past the chic stores past the boarded up buildings past the place where they first met she starts down the stairs he goes through the door into the train behind the counter gone. thoughts? -- Posted by sosupkthnx at 11:04 am on Sep. 27, 2008 What the fuck is this? -- Posted by carracer at 11:05 am on Sep. 27, 2008 You said it yourself. Its a lame poem. -- Posted by Louisianaaa X3 at 11:16 am on Sep. 27, 2008 awe i like it verryy much good job.. cept its mushy.. -- Posted by nikki123 at 11:20 am on Sep. 27, 2008 not bad. would be a bit longer though and have a bit more detail but its alright. mediocre. keep trying.