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-- Posted by evann92 at 8:13 am on Oct. 1, 2008

As his vioce deepends,
The pain only gets worse.
More powerful than ever.
He slaps her to the ground.
Only caring about himself.
Scenceless.
As she screams,
'Mercy please don't do this!'
He rapes her repeatedly.
She's left on the ground.
Empty of herself.
Alone.
He's taken everything but her heart.
The only thing that will carry her through the cold nights wind.


-- Posted by Dont Notice Me at 8:13 am on Oct. 1, 2008

sucks.


-- Posted by stiicky iicky at 8:14 am on Oct. 1, 2008

Quote: from dont notice me at 8:13 am on Oct. 1, 2008


sucks.
this.


-- Posted by punkypanda at 8:15 am on Oct. 1, 2008

good but its 'senseless'


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