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-- Posted by m8ggi3 at 3:17 pm on Oct. 2, 2008

its about how i feel, and how i put on a face 4 the world 2 c, but its not actually how i am. although, on here, im far more honest than i am in real life. just keep that in mind. ive been writing songs since i was rly little, like as far back as i can remember (which is about 2) like i would make up songs in the bath and on the changing table and b4 i went 2 sleep and stuff
like that. so be harsh, but honest.

Keep my feelings on the inside,
Put on a smile,
But all I really wanna do is cry
At first glance,
No way am I sad,
No, not a chance
But if you look through a magnifying glass,
You'd see,
That's not the real me
Just look and see,
Inside of me,
There's a little bottle where I keep my feelings,
My thoughts from the inside,
Where my two worlds collide,
But its something that you'll never find
Cause its locked up in my mind,
If people really knew me,
They'd think I was crazy,
Yeah they'd think I'm insane,

and ill add more l8r. STEAL MY LYRICS AND ILL FUCKIN RAT U OUT WHEN IM FAMOUS! and tyvm 2 u if u dont! <3

tyvm 2 any1 and every1 who replies!

<3 ma&&!3 <3


-- Posted by draino at 3:17 pm on Oct. 2, 2008

no


-- Posted by Scandol5Mossie at 3:19 pm on Oct. 2, 2008

umm doesnt sound like a song for one and for two..its the same thing over and over


-- Posted by TheFamousLivingDead at 3:20 pm on Oct. 2, 2008

I don't like it.


-- Posted by m8ggi3 at 3:23 pm on Oct. 2, 2008

aww nobody likes it      


-- Posted by SearchxAndxDestroy at 3:26 pm on Oct. 2, 2008

Not at All.


-- Posted by m8ggi3 at 3:27 pm on Oct. 2, 2008

wow this is just not my day.


-- Posted by Mish34 at 1:14 pm on Oct. 6, 2008

No. Nothing personal - I just don't like this style of music at all.

Deal with bigger issues.


-- Posted by m8ggi3 at 2:14 pm on Oct. 6, 2008

Quote: from Mish34 at 1:14 pm on Oct. 6, 2008


No. Nothing personal - I just don't like this style of music at all.

Deal with bigger issues.


yea, id sing it 4 u, if i could record it and put it on the computer. it sounds better sung.


-- Posted by Sachacohen2 at 10:11 am on Oct. 7, 2008

too much like a poem


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