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-- Posted by belizabeth at 7:43 am on Oct. 10, 2008

Southern Girl   By: Brandy E. Rogers
Short stories of actual things that have happened.

Born in 1994 on The Fort Gordon army base in Georgia on February 8th.  I am a proud southern girl but we all have our faults and our stories. Well at least I know I do.

Okay my first story of my life begins when I was in the second grade. Me and my friend Dezma were daring each other to do some stupid things. Well before I go on let me back up a little.


-- Posted by Dont Notice Me at 7:44 am on Oct. 10, 2008

no


-- Posted by kay dee at 7:44 am on Oct. 10, 2008

If you're in, like, seventh grade, sure


-- Posted by Chiefette at 7:44 am on Oct. 10, 2008

Not really. It isn't very well written, not very creative either.


-- Posted by The Artery at 7:45 am on Oct. 10, 2008

why does your first life story begin in the second grade?


-- Posted by belizabeth at 7:45 am on Oct. 10, 2008

hmmm... i don't know.


-- Posted by kay dee at 7:45 am on Oct. 10, 2008

You're already skipping around.
It's grammatically incorrect.
It's poorly written.

It MIGHT get you a D


-- Posted by hI jAMES at 7:48 am on Oct. 10, 2008

No.  Simple answer, no.


-- Posted by belizabeth at 7:49 am on Oct. 10, 2008

okay thanks. i'll start over.


-- Posted by GongShow at 7:50 am on Oct. 10, 2008

thats horrible. start over.

say this

I was sucking some guys dick and my daddy walked in on me. He wanted his sucked too.


-- Posted by zluvsanime at 7:50 am on Oct. 10, 2008

fail, or not, i dont actually know


-- Posted by belizabeth at 7:53 am on Oct. 10, 2008

heck no...


-- Posted by dropdead8883 at 7:54 am on Oct. 10, 2008

no


-- Posted by belizabeth at 7:55 am on Oct. 10, 2008

okay....


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