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-- Posted by charmgirl at 3:44 am on Oct. 20, 2008
i wanted to share it with you,i was bored and while surfing the web i found that poem and i really liked it,not sure if you will but nothing to lose,right??
Looking in the mirror,
At this invisible face,
This soul has vanished,
Without a trace,
Only the memories,
When left behind,
And still I morn,
For a love I cant find,
A soul that was happy,
Now lives in strife,
Walking in the shadows,
Of my empty life,
Should I end it all,
Or try to be strong?
It doesn't matter,
You wouldn't notice if I was gone,
Was my heart fooled?
By you deceiving lies,
Come back to me,
Wipe these tears from my eyes,
Bleeding for the truth,
Struggling to find your heart,
But you don't feel the way I do,
And its ripping me apart,
But until my soul is found,
I will never let you know,
You'll have my heart forever,
But I have to let you go..

-- Posted by Hoebag at 3:44 am on Oct. 20, 2008
So emo

-- Posted by italianfire at 3:46 am on Oct. 20, 2008
Quote: from charmgirl at 3:44 am on Oct. 20, 2008
i wanted to share it with you,i was bored and while surfing the web i found that poem and i really liked it,not sure if you will but nothing to lose,right??
Looking in the mirror,
At this invisible face,
This soul has vanished,
Without a trace,
Only the memories,
When left behind,
And still I morn,
For a love I cant find,
A soul that was happy,
Now lives in strife,
Walking in the shadows,
Of my empty life,
Should I end it all,
Or try to be strong?
It doesn't matter,
You wouldn't notice if I was gone,
Was my heart fooled?
By you deceiving lies,
Come back to me,
Wipe these tears from my eyes,
Bleeding for the truth,
Struggling to find your heart,
But you don't feel the way I do,
And its ripping me apart,
But until my soul is found,
I will never let you know,
You'll have my heart forever,
But I have to let you go..

thats exactly how i feel right about now

-- Posted by Hoebag at 3:47 am on Oct. 20, 2008
DONT QUOTE THE OP WHEN THE POST IS LIKE THE SIZE OF ENGLAND

-- Posted by addicted to girls at 11:03 pm on Jan. 12, 2009
whoa