-- Posted by MusicalSuicide17 at 10:49 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Idk. Its not too good but w/e. I'm sitting alone inside myself/Wondering if the cards I'm dealt/Are worth playing in this game/The one where you get inside my head/And twist around everything I've said/The words you speak are they true?/Is there really a me and you?/Cuz I can't understand/Why?/Would you have to lie/Diretctly to my heart/Is this how it starts?/You love me today/Tomorrow what will you say?/I'm drawing blanks and can't describe/The way you make me feel inside/I will break into pieces just for you/Put me back together soon/Or am I puzzled just like you?/I feel broken/And I'm chokin on these three words/Do you know what I mean?/I'm screaming I love you/I love you so -- Posted by Jadien at 10:51 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Well, it is passionate. -- Posted by snowcone200 at 10:52 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Would sound better as a song then poem. need more ryhme for a normal love poem and more deepness? but as a song it good -- Posted by MusicalSuicide17 at 10:52 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Jadien at 1:51 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Well, it is passionate. Thanks -- Posted by Napster the Hacker at 10:53 am on Oct. 23, 2008 whts with all slashers? '/' good one though -- Posted by Eos at 10:55 am on Oct. 23, 2008 I love you too. -- Posted by Jadien at 10:55 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 1:53 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 whts with all slashers? '/' good one though It designates the lines of poetry so it's not just a big run on sentence. -- Posted by MusicalSuicide17 at 10:56 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Jadien at 1:55 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 1:53 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 whts with all slashers? '/'    good one though It designates the lines of poetry so it's not just a big run on sentence. Yup   -- Posted by superchris4000 at 10:56 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Really good. It would also sound good as a song. lol -- Posted by bloodhunter at 11:01 am on Oct. 23, 2008 That's really good I love it -- Posted by Napster the Hacker at 11:01 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Jadien at 11:25 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 1:53 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 whts with all slashers? '/'    good one though It designates the lines of poetry so it's not just a big run on sentence. ow, never knew that.well never did poetry :P   -- Posted by Jadien at 11:03 am on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 2:01 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Jadien at 11:25 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 1:53 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 whts with all slashers? '/'   good one though    It designates the lines of poetry so it's not just a big run on sentence.  ow, never knew that.well never did poetry :P Haha, I don't do it either. I just assumed it was common knowledge. Haha, I guess you do learn something new everyday. (: -- Posted by Napster the Hacker at 1:44 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Jadien at 11:33 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 2:01 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Jadien at 11:25 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 Quote: from Napster the Hacker at 1:53 pm on Oct. 23, 2008 whts with all slashers? '/'       good one though   It designates the lines of poetry so it's not just a big run on sentence.     ow, never knew that.well never did poetry :P   Haha, I don't do it either. I just assumed it was common knowledge.   Haha, I guess you do learn something new everyday. (: hehe yeah ofc :P -- Posted by emmy350 at 5:23 pm on Oct. 26, 2008 Aww, that's really sweet and a tad bit sad.