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-- Posted by B E K at 11:19 pm on Oct. 23, 2008

It's called 'A Visible Spectrum'. I have the first two chapters on my deviantART.

cannonbonk.deviantart.com
It's the only two things I have up so far, if you don't understand, then it's 'Elliott 1:1" and "Elliott 1:2"


PLEASE leave some feedback.

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