-- Posted by katjassidekick at 5:38 pm on Oct. 27, 2008 Please point out some things I can work on. I've already pinned these things down myself from self-critique: I should really take my time and do the shadows more carefully. And yes, there is a signature on there on the bottom right but I didn't want people to see my last name. -Note: it isn't a portrait of anyone. Well, my intentions were no one, really, but it ended up sort of looking like me. -- Posted by XxPaperFlowersxX at 5:39 pm on Oct. 27, 2008 I love the eyes. You have a very talented skill. -- Posted by Riot at 5:40 pm on Oct. 27, 2008 Hmm.... I think it should be a bit longer and narrower. -- Posted by katjassidekick at 5:41 pm on Oct. 27, 2008 Quote: from Riot at 5:40 pm on Oct. 27, 2008 Hmm.... I think it should be a bit longer and narrower. What should be longer and narrower? I mean, I'm not saying that your opinion is wrong, but if you mean the face, you can't really judge that unless I had a picture source. -- Posted by MR UNKNOWN at 8:09 pm on Oct. 27, 2008 your proportions are off red = you (based on noes) green = correct (based on eyes) correct me if I'm wrong because I'm still new at this -- Posted by ininjateddybear at 6:40 pm on Nov. 4, 2008 I love it -- Posted by ElephantStone at 2:21 am on Nov. 5, 2008 well are we aiming to do a realistic drawing or a cartoon? Because it succeeds in the latter.