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-- Posted by dreamweaver at 8:37 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

I did this for my typography class (fonts and shit). Basically, he wanted us to be comfortable using fonts as part of an image, so he gave us an assignment to re-design the Campbell soup label in an abstract sense.

Comments, please. And only constructive ones at that. (In other words, please explain why you like it or hate it, don't just say "sweet!", "stupid" or whatever else like that. Explain...)


-- Posted by Ethryx at 8:38 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

I really like how that came out :] That is very interesting, and amazing at the same time. Nice work


-- Posted by HuffleHaire at 8:38 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

I like it because it is a two dimensional soup can. It's got everything there. The soup, the bar code, the swirly lid part.

It is a can.


-- Posted by cuttergirl13 at 8:38 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

it looks pretty cool... but I'm not sure what the message is suppose to be...


-- Posted by Chiefette at 8:38 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

I don't like the orange splatter, that just looks sloppy.  I like everything else though.


-- Posted by sidekick k at 8:39 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

wow! i'm impressed!


-- Posted by AliciaVengeance at 8:39 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

I love it.


-- Posted by utheh at 8:39 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

Its well balanced, the orange front and flor de les at the bottom add alot to the peice.


-- Posted by Charolastra at 8:40 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

i'm not feeling the fonts, particularly the 'nutrition facts' one, nor the one for the bar code label thingy


-- Posted by akSamiRae at 8:41 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

Quote: from Glory at 8:38 pm on Oct. 27, 2008


I don't like the orange splatter, that just looks sloppy. I like everything else though.

agreed, they kinda look like flames too though, which totaly throw it off.


-- Posted by The Artery at 8:45 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

cool.


-- Posted by HiRyo at 8:49 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

I love it but the "condensed" (thats what it says right) font could turn out a little better but then again I have a rough idea of what the soup can looks like so if thats the font on there then :D it's awesome


-- Posted by dreamweaver at 8:55 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

Quote: from aksamirae at 11:41 pm on Oct. 27, 2008


Quote: from Glory at 8:38 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

I don't like the orange splatter, that just looks sloppy. I like everything else though.
 
agreed, they kinda look like flames too though, which totaly throw it off.

It's supposed to be the soup itself- tomato soup to be exact.


i'm not feeling the fonts, particularly the 'nutrition facts' one, nor the one for the bar code label thingy

I didn't change the fonts. In fact, I was trying to keep the font as close as possible to the original that was on the can. The barcode thing is like a personal touch... probably should have just done the numbers. *shrugs*


-- Posted by dreamweaver at 8:57 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

Quote: from Hiryo at 11:49 pm on Oct. 27, 2008


I love it but the "condensed" (thats what it says right) font could turn out a little better but then again I have a rough idea of what the soup can looks like so if thats the font on there then :D it's awesome

Here's what the label looks like:
http://heatherw.com/mk/endorse/pics/red_label.jpg


-- Posted by OnlyTooProud at 10:17 pm on Oct. 27, 2008

It looks very intresting.


-- Posted by Micus at 5:44 am on Oct. 28, 2008

I really like it!

It's very 3D.. I find myself looking through from layer to layer. Nice.


-- Posted by dreamweaver at 8:14 am on Oct. 28, 2008

Thanks. :)


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