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-- Posted by rufoo at 9:53 pm on Oct. 30, 2008

Alright. I dont No Mary Magdalene, But I read her poem. And I can so totally relate to that as of right now. With my situation I was recently in. So really I just wanna spit a poem/rhyme out in quote/response to hers.

this is hers
Quote: from Mary Magdalene at 1:56 pm on Oct. 29, 2008


I want to think
You will be there
Every time I wake
But one day you won't
One day you'll be gone.

I would love to think
That you will always love me
Never deceive me
Be there through thick and thin
But I know you won't

With every person
And every relationship
There comes a time to change
And a time to move on
To finally let go


Mine ... Its "Untitled" But w/e


then again my side hasnt been looked
just the sense that I leave is all you took
And maybe I wasnt the right person for you
Yet its always about the good times that seem so true

If I do leave, Just think about it now
the lucky man that might hold you the same way now
For right now, Just believe we could stay strong
The incredibles you and me , thats where it belongs

and as you said, there does come a time of change
And as time ticks , we just go our seperate ways
For better days. Yet no memories seem to faze
Just to the " End of our relationship
but not our love " phase

And as we move on to finally let ourselves go
I still walk a path with you in my heart....
...gone with the flow


-- Posted by Ariella Starr at 9:55 pm on Oct. 30, 2008

Awwwe, thats cute, but sad.. I like it.


-- Posted by taraxgoesxboom at 9:55 pm on Oct. 30, 2008

I like it.


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