-- Posted by MR UNKNOWN at 4:07 pm on Oct. 31, 2008 bahh it doesn't look perfect but I guess I'm happy? 1 hour prismicolor pencils -- Posted by Natsy at 4:10 pm on Oct. 31, 2008 its a bit wonky, but otherwise ok xx -- Posted by YeahBoii at 4:10 pm on Oct. 31, 2008 The apple one you posted last night was better but its still good. -- Posted by rrachelll at 4:11 pm on Oct. 31, 2008 cool -- Posted by ElephantStone at 8:19 am on Nov. 1, 2008 lacks depth -- Posted by morwen at 9:45 am on Nov. 1, 2008 Concentrate on your lines a bit more.  If youre doing still life, draw what you see.  For example, the bottom of the glass, is not rounded properly.  And the sides of the mouth of the glass in real life are straight but on the right side in your drawing it is slightly curved.  Attention to small details is the key. But otherwise good.  I <3 Prismacolour. -- Posted by MR UNKNOWN at 9:49 am on Nov. 1, 2008 Quote: from morwen at 12:45 pm on Nov. 1, 2008 Concentrate on your lines a bit more. If youre doing still life, draw what you see. For example, the bottom of the glass, is not rounded properly. And the sides of the mouth of the glass in real life are straight but on the right side in your drawing it is slightly curved. Attention to small details is the key. But otherwise good. I <3 Prismacolour. bahh yes, I know I'm still getting used to colored pencil (this is only my second thing I've ever done graphite is easy and you can erase, I don't think it's possible to redo the bottom part of the glass. -- Posted by NEGATIVE0 at 12:14 pm on Nov. 1, 2008 work on perspective! -- Posted by MissKate at 10:25 pm on Nov. 1, 2008 Definitely work on perspective. Everything looks a bit wonky - especially the bottom of the glass. If that were a real glass it would not be standing up! However it is shaded rather nicely. The corner of the table looks a bit strange, as morwen said you need to draw exactly what you see and I think on closer inspection you'll find that the table does not have that sharp of a corner. Perhaps practise by using bulkier cylinder shaped items just to get a better idea of perspective, even doing lots of rough sketches should help you to improve your skills. -- Posted by MR UNKNOWN at 10:28 pm on Nov. 1, 2008 Quote: from MissKate at 1:25 am on Nov. 2, 2008 Definitely work on perspective. Everything looks a bit wonky - especially the bottom of the glass. If that were a real glass it would not be standing up! However it is shaded rather nicely.   The corner of the table looks a bit strange, as morwen said you need to draw exactly what you see and I think on closer inspection you'll find that the table does not have that sharp of a corner. Perhaps practise by using bulkier cylinder shaped items just to get a better idea of perspective, even doing lots of rough sketches should help you to improve your skills. yeah, I think I'm just jumping too fast into this, I've never worked with glass or a transparent bottle before so yeah,