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-- Posted by juggalo sonic at 11:21 am on Nov. 5, 2008

"Cold as winter, strong as stone;
She faced the darkness all alone.
A silver goddess; a reflection.
A mirage, a recollection.
No return; no turning back.
The past is gone, the future, black.
Serpents gather in their nests,
And she stands above the rest.
Shadows hunt; she hunts shadow.
The moon is risen; she stands below.
She views her world through the eyes of others.
Black and white; there are no colors,
As she looks down upon a shattered youth.
A shattered mirror shows a shattered truth."


-- Posted by Urban Legend at 11:22 am on Nov. 5, 2008

Never been that big of a fan for poetry, but it's pretty cool.


-- Posted by whoami111 at 11:23 am on Nov. 5, 2008

the girl in your poem sounds like a bitch


-- Posted by paperskyx at 11:26 am on Nov. 5, 2008

It's stupid.


-- Posted by Lunarose at 11:33 am on Nov. 5, 2008

i like it


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