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-- Posted by bongbuddy at 4:05 pm on Nov. 16, 2008

i ride the dirt roads
with a bottle of jack
take a sip, hear your voice
goin faster and faster
i make my choice
i hit 90 and crash
everythings pain
cant feel my back
i crawl from the wreckage
.... with my bottle of jack
another sip, i hear your voice
then comes darkness
i welcome it


-- Posted by Unaccepted at 4:06 pm on Nov. 16, 2008

That's actually, a really cool poem. Nice work!


-- Posted by idontwanttobehere at 4:10 pm on Nov. 16, 2008

cool. even though its wrong.


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