-- Posted by emmywashere3849 at 1:03 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 I need a title and I cant decide whether or not I like the last stanza, should I drop it or change it. ------------------------------------- In the silence of my mind I hear you You call out to me and I try to find you but I can not, you are not there In the darkness of my mind I see you You hold out your arms to me But I can not get to you, you are not there In the blandness of my mind I taste you You are so sweet, and beckon to me But I can not have you, you are not there In the hallow of my mind I feel you You are so warm, I try to hold you But I can not, you are not there In the stillness of my mind I smell you You are sensual and so inviting But I can not really breath you in, you are not there ----------------------------------- In the wakening of my mind I have you You are in my arms, so safe I'll keep you, because you are right here -- Posted by RIMHfire at 1:04 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 Wake. -- Posted by Written in Love at 1:07 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 Awaken in Silence -- Posted by nearlyinsane at 1:14 pm on Nov. 17, 2008 Sensing you. Something to do with senses would be PERFECT. P.S. I like it :D