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-- Posted by bananawhore at 12:39 pm on Nov. 19, 2008

Be honest, Thanks!

Like the bully on the plaground
Throughout elementary school days
Pick you up
Twirl your around
Throw you to the cold hard blacktop
Haunted faces
Children no older than you
Watch with dismay
But say nothing
They leave you there
To stand up again
Alone
Life will do the same
Obstacles thrown
Thoughts twirled violently around your head
Dissappintments lined up to meet you
And your left again
With nothing
Stand alone
Nostolagia wont get the best of you
But memories don't lie
And you cant help but wonder
If life is nothing more
Than the childhood playground and You just wonder
Why its you against the world
Against the whole damn world
Again.


-- Posted by Live Just To Die at 12:40 pm on Nov. 19, 2008

Its amazinggg =]


-- Posted by NikkiMikki at 12:47 pm on Nov. 19, 2008

Pretty good.


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