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-- Posted by carracer at 5:30 pm on Nov. 19, 2008

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-- Posted by ranman at 5:41 pm on Nov. 19, 2008

get rid of the I s that you don't need..

just go THe lightning crackles in the distance... or whatever


-- Posted by 17ismyluckynumber at 5:42 pm on Nov. 19, 2008

i love it ur pretty damn good


-- Posted by carracer at 6:10 pm on Nov. 19, 2008

Quote: from 17ismyluckynumber at 5:42 pm on Nov. 19, 2008


i love it ur pretty damn good

Thank you


-- Posted by carracer at 6:10 pm on Nov. 19, 2008

Quote: from ranman at 5:41 pm on Nov. 19, 2008


get rid of the I s that you don't need..

just go THe lightning crackles in the distance... or whatever


I will definitely consider that


-- Posted by bananawhore at 8:03 pm on Nov. 19, 2008

pretty good :)


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