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-- Posted by bananawhore at 2:20 pm on Nov. 20, 2008

Lies will wrap around my mind
Slowly smother me
No difference
The lines so blurred
Between truths and lies and realities.
Tell my anything
Forced to believe
Forced to agree
Over analyze
And take nothing with a grain of salt
The workings of my mind.
Critisizm hurled right toward me
And jokes and irony
Interperrted the wrong way.
Expected to gracefully glide away
Instead they cling and drape around me
Hide themselves beneath my skin.
Forever kept within me
Driving me past the point of hate.
Compliments thrown
Now and then
Slide quickly off my skin
Slimy and greasy
And to me so untrue.
Just Cant believe
One single good thing
Not a single thing to combat the lies
I force myself to believe.


-- Posted by addicted to girls at 2:21 pm on Nov. 20, 2008

cool


-- Posted by spartan09 at 2:22 pm on Nov. 20, 2008

Critizism hurled right toward me
Interpreted the wrong way.

Other then that, it looks excellent.


-- Posted by bananawhore at 2:39 pm on Nov. 20, 2008

thanks, i'll tell her


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