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-- Posted by bordmb at 2:53 pm on Nov. 21, 2008
BLIND LOVE when I see you my heart burns when you talk oh how it yearns but im scared to ask for more for I know not what's in store will our future be as friends will we love until the end ill wait for you to give a sign until then my heart is blind so I want your opinion .on the poem
-- Posted by Kipzillah at 2:54 pm on Nov. 21, 2008
short and sweet....two thumbs up
-- Posted by boyluvr84 at 2:54 pm on Nov. 21, 2008
what happens when ur not in love anymore? hate poems? fuck her poems? stick it in ur juice box & suck it poems? [cant wait?]
-- Posted by xidus at 2:56 pm on Nov. 21, 2008
i like it :D 100 out of 10 :)
-- Posted by Nyx28 at 4:44 pm on Nov. 21, 2008
Punctuation would rock in this poem. The poem was good in concept,though it could've been written better.I still like the poem though.
-- Posted by sebsam at 8:21 am on Mar. 22, 2009
tis wickedy wooo!!! me loves it :D Well done
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