-- Posted by Dragonfang93 at 2:31 am on Nov. 23, 2008 Okay, this poem is so close to my heart. I wrote it for my ex-boyfriend that passed away, so I hold it very close. I've been asked to read some poems at our graduation ceremony, I was just wondering what you think of one of the poems I've decided on: Until Forever Fades Away Some people say You only get one chance Some people's lives Are lived like a dance Particular steps In just the right way Until the pattern gets broken On one special day My dance was interrupted By a boy on a white horse And I fell in love With him of course He took my hand He took the lead He helped me mount His faithful steed We rode into the sunset And kissed under the stars Then we were connected By the love in our hearts He took my hand He told me how We glided over land Until the final bow We danced the night away Until the stars turned to day He turned to me And I heard him say 'I'll be by your side Until Forever Fades Away' -- Posted by W o n d e r l a n d at 2:32 am on Nov. 23, 2008 Its readable -- Posted by Gaelle at 2:32 am on Nov. 23, 2008 I like the meaning of it, but it's a bit too much rhyme for my taste. -- Posted by kissmeimirish at 2:33 am on Nov. 23, 2008 sorry to hear its really sweet and really good :) . -- Posted by kakashisensei at 2:34 am on Nov. 23, 2008 um i dont think poetrty is really your thing this sucks king kong balls -- Posted by xBeautifulTragedyx at 2:34 am on Nov. 23, 2008 I like the first stanza. -- Posted by Rayne237 at 2:35 am on Nov. 23, 2008 I think it's really sweet.....Fiction? Or nonfiction? He needs a copy.... -- Posted by kakashisensei at 2:35 am on Nov. 23, 2008 uggg... seriously, life is a dance? Riding away into the sunset on a white horse? Did you purposefully look up every oversused cliche situations in poems and put  them in this? Your poem is a satire on poetry right? -- Posted by Dragonfang93 at 2:41 am on Nov. 23, 2008 Quote: from Rayne237 at 9:05 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 I think it's really sweet.....Fiction? Or nonfiction? He needs a copy.... Some of it is fiction, some of it isn't... He's already read it... as I said, it's old... He read it before he died. -- Posted by twiikz at 9:20 am on Mar. 31, 2009 -_- sorry about the bad news... but loved the poem. xxxx