-- Posted by Anonymous at 7:46 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 Such sweet beauty, it captivates me, and forever I am bound, both in heart and in soul, to feel such great affection. So gorgeous is her body, so attractive her features. I must confess that as each second does pass, so does my infatuation. My love for her grows stronger, unhindered by any force of Earth or Heaven above. And so it is that this love I feel for her, the one whom I call my closest friend, is unto itself a curse. How pitiable it is that I should fall for one who I am so close to, and yet am perpetually far from. Forever by her side yet never able to hold her in my arms. Though I know it to be a dream which shall forever remain unobtainable, my desire and longing for her affections shall not die. For eternity I am doomed to the hell of unrequited love for a friend. -- Posted by HeavenShallBurn at 7:47 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 Its o.k... I gave it an 8 -- Posted by MixedDelight at 7:48 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 It's pleasant. -- Posted by Kjanhot at 7:48 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 Too long!! -- Posted by Skyler72 rawrr at 7:49 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 I like poems that rhyme. 5/10. -- Posted by carracer at 7:50 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 Quote: from Kjanhot at 7:48 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 Too long!! Wow. Not true at all. Quit complaining. -- Posted by Anonymous at 7:54 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 Quote: from Skyler72 at 10:49 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 I like poems that rhyme. 5/10. I can't rhyme without turning things to crap. So, free verse for the win. -- Posted by carracer at 7:58 pm on Nov. 23, 2008 I like it, but I don't think the idea is very original. I will give it a seven. I agree with you about the free verse thing though. Rhymes set unwanted limitations. If you ever want to talk about poetry message me. :)