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-- Posted by Anonymous at 8:30 pm on Nov. 23, 2008
All your life you knew Things that were expected of you Tasks that you were born to complete And human nature's wants and needs. But now I see And now I know Dall me cynical I prefer term "insightful" Because I see We cant all be Perfect. Always did your best at everything that came your way For "Failure, is not an option" theyd say You were taught this from such a young age And never thought to question it. But now I see And now I know Dall me cynical I prefer term "insightful" Because I see We cant all be Perfect. Perfect, oh, perfect We all want to be perfect But hows it possible for everyone to Be the best? Reality, it hurts some times, But you'll just have to learn to cope with the fact That your never gonna get what you wanted. Because perfects, not so perfect If getting there, hurts this much. And now I know Dall me cynical I prefer term "insightful" Because I see We cant all be Perfect.
-- Posted by TBMP at 8:31 pm on Nov. 23, 2008
its good points but its not fantastically presented more of a vent than a poem really
-- Posted by carracer at 8:33 pm on Nov. 23, 2008
As a poem it lacks pattern and creativity. In my opinion of course. Not sure about as a song. The same rules don't apply as in a poem. Either way though, I just think its a shallow idea. It lacks depth and thought.
-- Posted by VonGuy1 at 8:33 pm on Nov. 23, 2008
i like it it pretty good
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