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-- Posted by Special Agent Orange at 6:31 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

im not done, but just a drawing i started earlier today in charcoal.
id just like you people to critique what i have so far before i finish.
what do you think?
obviously i dont like my own artwork,and im new to drawing real people so i need you guys to be the judge.
im going to fix up the shading on his face, and finish the rest of his body.


-- Posted by TheWiseManOfYou at 6:31 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

It looks great.


-- Posted by GoliathJustin at 6:31 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Scary.


-- Posted by Vana at 6:31 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

its way better than what I can do. It looks a little off, but your almost there :D


-- Posted by k14nk at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

edward cullen much?


Hes a fag.


-- Posted by Flikted001 at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

is that johnny depp? i like it.


-- Posted by beautyskooldropout at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

sweeney todd?


-- Posted by kayla2 at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Sweeny Todd?


-- Posted by auron at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

not bad..but you need pratice


-- Posted by beautyskooldropout at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Quote: from k14nk at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008


edward cullen much?

 
Hes a fag.


uhm, johnny depp in sweeney todd?


-- Posted by TruexZero at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Quote: from k14nk at 9:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008


edward cullen much?

 
Hes a fag.


That's Sweeney Todd, moron.


-- Posted by Special Agent Orange at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Quote: from Flikted001 at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008


is that johnny depp? i like it.

yes  


-- Posted by XxFoxXfirexX at 6:33 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Sweeney Todd!


-- Posted by crazychica21 at 6:33 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

thats ah-mazing!


-- Posted by peppermintchalk at 6:33 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

it's goooood... man i wish i could draw..


-- Posted by GaelicFreak at 6:33 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

I like it.

Plus...icon love.


-- Posted by monkeydoodle77 at 6:33 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Quote: from k14nk at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008


edward cullen much?

 
Hes a fag.


Haha. I laughing at the fact that you are dumb. That's Sweeney Todd.


-- Posted by Tavis at 6:34 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

I could tell who this is, so yes, I like it. It's a good thing, knowing what it is, makes for a good picture.


-- Posted by Special Agent Orange at 6:34 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Quote: from monkeydoodle77 at 6:33 pm on Nov. 26, 2008


Quote: from k14nk at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

edward cullen much?  

 
 Hes a fag.


Haha. I laughing at the fact that you are dumb. That's Sweeney Todd.


i really dont think it looked like edward  


-- Posted by Sarge at 6:35 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Good as far as ability, but I don't like that particular picture.


-- Posted by Precarious at 6:35 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

i think you've done a good job so far just keep practicing and im sure it will me amazing


-- Posted by monkeydoodle77 at 6:37 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Quote: from billygoat at 6:34 pm on Nov. 26, 2008


Quote: from monkeydoodle77 at 6:33 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Quote: from k14nk at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

edward cullen much?

   
  Hes a fag.


 

 Haha. I laughing at the fact that you are dumb. That's Sweeney Todd.


i really dont think it looked like edward



I know. Its supposed to be Sweeney right?


-- Posted by Special Agent Orange at 6:37 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Quote: from Sarge at 6:35 pm on Nov. 26, 2008


Good as far as ability, but I don't like that particular picture.

eh...i didnt think it was the best picture to draw from either...was going to do this one, but figured id save it for something else i had planned on larger paper.
i like the emotion in this picture.


-- Posted by Kitty Kat at 6:37 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

I like it. ^_^


-- Posted by Special Agent Orange at 6:38 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Quote: from monkeydoodle77 at 6:37 pm on Nov. 26, 2008


Quote: from billygoat at 6:34 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Quote: from monkeydoodle77 at 6:33 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

Quote: from k14nk at 6:32 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

edward cullen much?    

     
  Hes a fag.


  Haha. I laughing at the fact that you are dumb. That's Sweeney Todd.


 

 i really dont think it looked like edward  



I know. Its supposed to be Sweeney right?

yeah...
lol well im glad most people can tell what its supposed to be.


-- Posted by person well maybe at 8:28 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

the facial structure it a little off some areas are a little to harsh but it is a good start and recognizable keep going your doing good


-- Posted by mrmomo at 8:36 pm on Nov. 26, 2008

you can definitely recognize who it is. you just need to work on seeing where the facial features go. for example, you can see in the picture that the end on his mouth on the left side goes right to the middle of his left eye, but in your drawing, it only goes to the corner of his eye. the nose is a tad bit off too. I'm loving how you're doing his hair. :3


-- Posted by austin s23 at 6:05 pm on Nov. 27, 2008

VERY GOOD!!!!!!

im jealous


-- Posted by lovemetwicetoday at 1:38 am on Dec. 1, 2008

I think it's really good.


-- Posted by morwen at 9:33 am on Dec. 3, 2008

It looks like sweeney todd for sure.

The guy who said it was supposed to be edward is a complete idiot.


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