-- Posted by victoria6689 at 8:25 am on Nov. 27, 2008 "This space seems to me to be excellent. More than moments I see represented sensations." i need someone make that sentence right, because i feel there's something wrong in it, but i can't see what   -- Posted by Al Legator at 8:27 am on Nov. 27, 2008 It sounds pretty vague in it's intent. What is the context? What are you trying to get across? -- Posted by squashed banana at 8:29 am on Nov. 27, 2008 i dont understand what the second part means. this space seemed excellent to me -- Posted by easy at 8:29 am on Nov. 27, 2008 This space is excellent to me.I see represented sensations more than moments. -- Posted by BodomChick at 8:31 am on Nov. 27, 2008 it seems to me that this space is excellent? -- Posted by Kjanhot at 8:52 am on Nov. 27, 2008 "This space seems excellent to me. There are many moments that I see represented sensations." -- Posted by silverrose42 at 8:59 am on Nov. 27, 2008 This space seems excellent to me. I see represented sensations than many moments. -- Posted by GeneCosta at 11:09 am on Nov. 27, 2008 Although both sentences are theoretically correct, you probably want to reword the phrases. The second sentence is way too confusing, and I'm still not sure if I get its intent: "This space seems excellent to me. I see represented sensations more than (I see) moments." -- Posted by Shaknbake at 12:07 am on Nov. 30, 2008 Quote: from victoria6689 at 8:25 am on Nov. 27, 2008 "This space seems to me to be excellent. More than moments I see represented sensations." i need someone make that sentence right, because i feel there's something wrong in it, but i can't see what "This space is excellent," "I find this space to be excellent," "This space seems excellent," "More than (just) moments(Comma) I see sensations represented." I strongly recommend the 'just' in the second sentence, but it isn't absolutely necessary. The comma after 'moments' indicates the proper rhythm which gives that sentence feeling and makes it clear that the sentence is actually correct. -- Posted by Colleen35 at 12:39 am on Nov. 30, 2008 This space seems to me to be excellent. More than moments, I see represented sensations It's perfectly fine with the the comma there.  Stamp of approval.