-- Posted by MissVeganx at 5:31 pm on Dec. 1, 2008 I see thee light, You shine too brightly. Mock me by day; And taunt me nightly, Where I do go, You follow in vain; For I feel none, But sorrow and shame. Last year, or when? Time bares no meaning. All I do hear, Is distant screaming. By night; I dream Of his bloodied chest. By day; consumed The guilt, too intense. My blood runs black, Mine soul is broken. My throat pricks dry; Of words failed spoken. I hope you like it! Any comments, etc. are much appreciated.   -- Posted by babecakes at 5:32 pm on Dec. 1, 2008 thats amazing! -- Posted by Catalyst11 at 5:32 pm on Dec. 1, 2008 This is really good -- Posted by noraa at 5:33 pm on Dec. 1, 2008 I actually really love this. I usually don't see too much poetry I like on LiveWire, but this was incredible. Keep it up! -- Posted by MissVeganx at 5:33 pm on Dec. 1, 2008 Thankyou so much :) -- Posted by XsmilygirlX at 5:37 pm on Dec. 1, 2008 That's great -- Posted by MissVeganx at 1:00 pm on Dec. 4, 2008 Thanks!