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-- Posted by Tex Lukas at 2:18 pm on Dec. 11, 2008

I just wrote this poem last night and was debating wheather or not to put it on. but, i am now :)


The missing treasure of this sinking vessel
On the seafloor, where it would nestle
Against the base for years it'd lay
Patiently waiting for that special day
When I would come to claim my prize
Hoping the chest to my surprise
Would hold the heart that I've been missing
The talks, the laughs, the hugs, the kissing
That day has come and now I'll find
What lies ahead, no longer behind
I've searched through darkness, to the deepest sea
And found that chest staring back at me
What lies inside, I do not know
Unlock the latch and open slow
I peek within, with nerves I'm shaking
The prize inside could stop the aching
Cause within the chest that I've searched for
I found the heart and even more
The talks, the laughs, they all were there
The hugs, the kisses, for me to share
The most beautiful treasure I've finally seized
Did not imagine I could be so pleased
I searched so long through the deep sea blue
I love you baby, my prize is you


-- Posted by RIMHfire at 2:19 pm on Dec. 11, 2008

No.


-- Posted by FuzzyBearJr at 2:21 pm on Dec. 11, 2008

oo
i likey


-- Posted by Tex Lukas at 2:21 pm on Dec. 11, 2008

Quote: from RIMHfire at 2:19 pm on Dec. 11, 2008


No.

Well how should i change it then? don't just say no :P


-- Posted by furr at 2:23 pm on Dec. 11, 2008

i love it god job <3 r u from texas????


-- Posted by Tex Lukas at 2:25 pm on Dec. 11, 2008

Quote: from FuzzyBearJr at 2:21 pm on Dec. 11, 2008


oo
i likey  


Thanks  


-- Posted by Tex Lukas at 2:25 pm on Dec. 11, 2008

Quote: from furr at 2:23 pm on Dec. 11, 2008


i love it god job <3 r u from texas????

Thank you and yes. why?


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