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-- Posted by Tex Lukas at 2:18 pm on Dec. 11, 2008
I just wrote this poem last night and was debating wheather or not to put it on. but, i am now :) The missing treasure of this sinking vessel On the seafloor, where it would nestle Against the base for years it'd lay Patiently waiting for that special day When I would come to claim my prize Hoping the chest to my surprise Would hold the heart that I've been missing The talks, the laughs, the hugs, the kissing That day has come and now I'll find What lies ahead, no longer behind I've searched through darkness, to the deepest sea And found that chest staring back at me What lies inside, I do not know Unlock the latch and open slow I peek within, with nerves I'm shaking The prize inside could stop the aching Cause within the chest that I've searched for I found the heart and even more The talks, the laughs, they all were there The hugs, the kisses, for me to share The most beautiful treasure I've finally seized Did not imagine I could be so pleased I searched so long through the deep sea blue I love you baby, my prize is you
-- Posted by RIMHfire at 2:19 pm on Dec. 11, 2008
No.
-- Posted by FuzzyBearJr at 2:21 pm on Dec. 11, 2008
oo i likey
-- Posted by Tex Lukas at 2:21 pm on Dec. 11, 2008
Quote: from RIMHfire at 2:19 pm on Dec. 11, 2008
No.
Well how should i change it then? don't just say no :P
-- Posted by furr at 2:23 pm on Dec. 11, 2008
i love it god job <3 r u from texas????
-- Posted by Tex Lukas at 2:25 pm on Dec. 11, 2008
Quote: from FuzzyBearJr at 2:21 pm on Dec. 11, 2008
oo i likey 
Thanks
-- Posted by Tex Lukas at 2:25 pm on Dec. 11, 2008
Quote: from furr at 2:23 pm on Dec. 11, 2008
i love it god job <3 r u from texas????
Thank you and yes. why?
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