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-- Posted by heyitnat at 2:07 pm on Dec. 14, 2008
For the life of mine, Cruelty shall not take thou place When time comes, surprises will follow Absences may seek hope, and dawns may learn faith Arises the sun, as we wake; see the beautiful colors the world holds for us Everyday thou soul loves and hurts When time breathes, we must learn To accept surprises and praise upon thy core Where one meets another, We Adore (What do you guys think? Honest answers, Please)
-- Posted by guitargogo90 at 2:08 pm on Dec. 14, 2008
good, not great (you wanted honesty)
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