-- Posted by smiileyy boo at 8:07 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 my gone angel god sent me an angel, who cared for me an loved me like no other then took him back. i guess there must have been a mistake. i thought it was me, but i realized it was a learning experience. to be careful who i love, to let go when it's time to let go, cause the longer you hang on the more it's goin to hurt. i hanged on for a long while. i cant help but to think if he still thinks of me. but time heals everything an everyone, even heartbroken me. an in time i will be on my way to beter livin. free of any worries, or sleepless nights only filled with tears. cause i know there's someone alot better out there for me. i cant earase -- Posted by SorryxSight at 8:09 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 grammar is horrible. -- Posted by The Last Magister at 8:10 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Earase? I love that word. I think you mean erase. A lot is two words I wouldn't recommend using "even heartbroken me" just because it doesn't flow well, Hanged is not a word, it's hung. I like the content, I really do, just revise a bit please, for everyone's, including your own, sake. -- Posted by hard candy at 8:10 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from SorryxSight at 8:09 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 grammar is horrible. this ^ -- Posted by smiileyy boo at 8:13 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from SorryxSight at 8:09 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 grammar is horrible. well srry my grammer isnt perfect but im not doing an essay. -- Posted by Fondziie at 8:13 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 awww cute..i love it! -- Posted by smiileyy boo at 8:15 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from Fondziie at 8:13 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 awww cute..i love it! thank you very much i know at least someone likes it lol :) -- Posted by The Last Magister at 8:16 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from smiileyy boo at 10:15 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from Fondziie at 8:13 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 awww cute..i love it! thank you very much i know at least someone likes it lol :) I did say I liked it! I just said revise the grammar because it blows more than an inner city whore! -- Posted by smiileyy boo at 8:18 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from TheLastMagister at 8:16 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from smiileyy boo at 10:15 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 Quote: from Fondziie at 8:13 pm on Dec. 19, 2008 awww cute..i love it!    thank you very much    i know at least someone likes it lol    :) I did say I liked it! I just said revise the grammar because it blows more than an inner city whore! whore? wtf?