-- Posted by Flikted001 at 10:26 am on Dec. 20, 2008 I'm supposed to be writing a poem for school {again}, and I need to know if this will work. We're supposed to write something on one of four things: Teen sexuality A world tragedy {9/11, Katrina, ect} OR Lost loved ones.. I wrote one on 9/11.. Do you think it'll get me a passing grade? (It also can't be longer than 15 lines) Remember it Flying fire Remember this Death for hire Remember all The loved ones gone Remember that We must move on Remember that It changes nothing Remember that The end is coming Not my best work.. but I think its good enough. ...Opinions? -- Posted by look over here at 10:27 am on Dec. 20, 2008 "We're supposed to write something on one of four things: Teen sexuality A world tragedy {9/11, Katrina, ect} OR Lost loved ones.. " Epic Fail. -- Posted by ArtFreak at 10:28 am on Dec. 20, 2008 Definitely good enough. I guess it depends how hey mark your work, but it shows a lot of language techniques and a bit of imagery the whole idea is very clever. I like it (: -- Posted by Flikted001 at 10:28 am on Dec. 20, 2008 Quote: from look over here at 10:27 am on Dec. 20, 2008 "We're supposed to write something on one of four things:   Teen sexuality   A world tragedy {9/11, Katrina, ect}   OR   Lost loved ones.. "   Epic Fail. I don't remember  the other one. Something to do with adolensense. <--- Excuse mispellings please.. -- Posted by Total Destruction at 10:29 am on Dec. 20, 2008 Quote: from look over here at 10:27 am on Dec. 20, 2008 "We're supposed to write something on one of four things:   Teen sexuality   A world tragedy {9/11, Katrina, ect}   OR   Lost loved ones.. "   Epic Fail. ^ this -- Posted by Kitty Kiska at 10:29 am on Dec. 20, 2008 Last line doesent fit in that well with the rhyme of the rest of the poem. -- Posted by Lei at 10:33 am on Dec. 20, 2008 Quote: from look over here at 10:27 am on Dec. 20, 2008 "We're supposed to write something on one of four things:   Teen sexuality   A world tragedy {9/11, Katrina, ect}   OR   Lost loved ones.. "   Epic Fail. Aha i thought that but then i couldn't be bothered to process the fact that it was a fail....nicely done. -- Posted by LoveLikeBlaqkWinter at 10:37 am on Dec. 20, 2008 Its gewd ^^ ^^. XxXx. -- Posted by Flikted001 at 10:46 am on Dec. 20, 2008 okay... thanks. -- Posted by GeneCosta at 8:30 am on Dec. 21, 2008 Depends on what grade you're in. This looks like a typical teenage poem, no offense. -- Posted by Flikted001 at 9:22 pm on Dec. 21, 2008 haha. i got a 97% on it. w00t