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-- Posted by rags125 at 1:20 pm on Dec. 20, 2008

  Do You Need It?
I hear the screaming
Of all the lives taken
Does it have to be this way?
No, but that's not my decision

Why the war?
We can't have peace?
We can't stop all of this?
All of the pain and suffering

It's nothing but pointless violence
Gun shots heard every minute
Innocent dying every day
Why make war with our enemies?

Enemies are your best ally
Yet you decide to fight them?
Idiotic, pointless, violent
All characteristics of war

If it's war that you seek
Then you're gonna get it
I only have one question:
Do you really need it?


-- Posted by its only me at 1:21 pm on Dec. 20, 2008

its good


-- Posted by makingxmexsmile at 1:22 pm on Dec. 20, 2008

Not too shabby =]


-- Posted by moehowardfan at 1:23 pm on Dec. 20, 2008

Not bad, my friend!


-- Posted by GeneCosta at 8:33 am on Dec. 21, 2008

IMO it's not that good. You're just regurgitating thoughts.


-- Posted by noraa at 9:20 am on Dec. 21, 2008

This poem has no point. It's well written and good, but it's just saying the same thing over and over again, and it's nothing new added to an argument.


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