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-- Posted by rags125 at 1:20 pm on Dec. 20, 2008
Do You Need It? I hear the screaming Of all the lives taken Does it have to be this way? No, but that's not my decision Why the war? We can't have peace? We can't stop all of this? All of the pain and suffering It's nothing but pointless violence Gun shots heard every minute Innocent dying every day Why make war with our enemies? Enemies are your best ally Yet you decide to fight them? Idiotic, pointless, violent All characteristics of war If it's war that you seek Then you're gonna get it I only have one question: Do you really need it?
-- Posted by its only me at 1:21 pm on Dec. 20, 2008
its good
-- Posted by makingxmexsmile at 1:22 pm on Dec. 20, 2008
Not too shabby =]
-- Posted by moehowardfan at 1:23 pm on Dec. 20, 2008
Not bad, my friend!
-- Posted by GeneCosta at 8:33 am on Dec. 21, 2008
IMO it's not that good. You're just regurgitating thoughts.
-- Posted by noraa at 9:20 am on Dec. 21, 2008
This poem has no point. It's well written and good, but it's just saying the same thing over and over again, and it's nothing new added to an argument.
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