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-- Posted by Deadman15 at 7:49 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
I wrote this for a girl and i was wondering if she'd like it so give opinions. We started a group
started a pact made for only 2
no one would stop us
as long as i had you We talked for hours
being as ridiculous as it seemed
but i started to feel something
something only talked about in dreams I always loved you
but there seemed to be more
but i never understood
why i was feeling this for. Because you weren't looking
you didnt want to be hurt
didnt want a broken heart
or a guy whose only a flirt I could tell by your words'
you wanted something with meaning
something worth fighting for
worth keeping and redeeming I won't push you
into something you dont want
but baybee you got me wishing it was me
because i know your different not a flirtacious flaunt I look at you differently
more than just a friend
wanting you to be more
would you be willing to take my hand? I try so hard
everyday just to look away
but its unbearable
with you theres never a day that turns gray No matter how hard you always try
to look the best you always amaze me
because no matter what
your always my beautiful baybee =] I know there are times
where i try to be your guy
sometimes theres not
but your the angel that allows me to fly i'd give the world to you
show you im not just another guy
be there when you need me
or when you need to cry The only one i think of
when i wake up
or go to bed
seems i can never get enough I'll love you
until the end of time
then i can look and say
sorry fella's this angels mine If it seems
like its just too much
its ok i can wait
doesn't mean we have to rush i just hope when the time does come
and you started showing signs
that i wont be outside looking in
that i'll be on your mind. Because your always on mine.
The girl who seems perfect for me
but if it happens
you know exactly where ill be Dont allow this
to make you look at me differently
because it's still always me
one who helped create MESAP just like you certainly I really do love you
just wanting you to know'
but ill wait
and let time just flow Because i know we'll have each other
no matter when times get tough
you'll always have me and i'll have you
be there when times just get rough i trust you
more than anyone i know
i guess thats a reason
why i love you so... But i hope you think of me
as a guy for you
because no matter what
i'll always love you =]
-- Posted by Miss Vanity at 7:51 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
Awww that's cute
-- Posted by matto at 7:51 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
if you move the y and replace one letter with an x, it spells the street i'm living on :P
-- Posted by surfrgrl at 7:51 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
oh my god. that was freaking beautiful.
-- Posted by Deadman15 at 7:53 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
Thank you everyone whose responded to this i just really hope she likes it like everyone here has so far =]
-- Posted by Lothar1 at 7:53 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
its very good there are some words i would change but its not bigge just really long lol
-- Posted by ToodleWoodles at 7:54 pm on Dec. 26, 2008
i cried. lol its beautiful, she'll love it.
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