-- Posted by coughcough at 8:11 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 she bit her lip as he pushed harder on her she opened her mouth to scream but nothing came out. He pushed down harder on her she tried to push him away but she wasnt strong enough to push him away.   Finaly he was gone she got up and walked back into the party her friend brought her to, She took out her cell and dialed 911 the sirens sounded and every one ran and stared at her. now she was alone, cold and scared. this is what i have so far idk what do u think? -- Posted by MystiqueBeauty16 at 8:12 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 That's not cool. At all. -- Posted by mrsgabbysmall at 8:12 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 um, how 'bout RAPE? -- Posted by Miss Vanity at 8:12 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 You should make it more descriptive. -- Posted by beautifoul at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 police came pretty quick. -- Posted by xwhylovewhyhatex at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 A bit short for a story. -- Posted by drowningfish at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 that should be like a PSA dangers of partying or somehting like thhat -- Posted by whips handcuffs at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 that's a story? -- Posted by Half ton hero at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 Thats it? lame. -- Posted by ToodleWoodles at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 umm yeah, im gonna leave this topic now. -- Posted by jacobs at 8:13 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 you said push too many times. find other words. -- Posted by In Our Eyes at 8:14 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 Will there be a second book? -- Posted by XOallixs0n at 8:15 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 why the FUCK would you post that? -- Posted by StopXXwatch at 8:17 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 Wow that wasn't very vivid at all. I couldn't apint a picture. I'mno JK but hell you gotta workharder than that! I wanna be a writer myself. And how about  The Defamation of Innocence. -- Posted by naturechild at 8:25 pm on Dec. 26, 2008 sounds like a rip off of speak. the book? yeah it's been done before. start something not so...depressing. happy stories!