-- Posted by roxann at 7:14 pm on Dec. 28, 2008 It's a quote from The Killers song "Human". I do have it written at the bottom of the page but my scanner cut it off. What do you think though? http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l227/bouvier-luver/dancer.jpg -- Posted by Magnifique at 7:14 pm on Dec. 28, 2008 Pretty :) -- Posted by Miss Vanity at 7:14 pm on Dec. 28, 2008 Cute -- Posted by Leelyy at 7:17 pm on Dec. 28, 2008 Haha. -- Posted by EarthEmpire at 10:05 pm on Dec. 28, 2008 Her head is disproportional to her body. The legs are kinda.. meaty. The feet have an unnatural shape to them. Also, it says "humam", to me anyways. And you might want to make straight lines when you do the writing. Hey, you asked for my opinion. -- Posted by roxann at 4:42 am on Dec. 29, 2008 I know the whole thing is slanted. Blame the scanner. Its cursive writing. -- Posted by getforless at 5:39 am on Dec. 29, 2008 good work -- Posted by EarthEmpire at 2:45 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 Quote: from roxann at 5:42 am on Dec. 29, 2008 I know the whole thing is slanted. Blame the scanner. Its cursive writing. Well, actually, your person is quite vertical, but the letters start to slant. In fact, the third line is more slanted than the first. Secondly, I use cursive for all my uni notes and my "n"s don't look like "m"s. Check your "an" in "human" and compare it with the "an" in "dancers". That vertical in the "human" "n" is what is killing your entire argument. -- Posted by mandible at 3:21 pm on Dec. 29, 2008 The words are not straight. The handling of the cursive is poor. your form, proportion and rendering all need work. -- Posted by roxann at 9:49 am on Dec. 30, 2008 Now i never said my cursive was any good. I actually dont write in it very often....so ya know looks good to me. And my art teacher said it was in proportion. -- Posted by EarthEmpire at 11:12 am on Dec. 30, 2008 Quote: from roxann at 10:49 am on Dec. 30, 2008 Now i never said my cursive was any good. I actually dont write in it very often....so ya know looks good to me. And my art teacher said it was in proportion. Your art teacher is trying to spare your feelings. If you can't take criticism, don't ask for opinions. -- Posted by mandible at 7:18 pm on Dec. 30, 2008 Quote: from roxann at 12:49 pm on Dec. 30, 2008 Now i never said my cursive was any good. I actually dont write in it very often....so ya know looks good to me. And my art teacher said it was in proportion. Your art teacher has no backbone. Or no art education/background. Also; I would like your art teacher's e-mail so I can tell them why they should retire. It is NOT in proportion. -- Posted by Finger Paint at 9:57 pm on Dec. 30, 2008 It's nice, but she looks a little funny. :) Work hard and you'll get better. -- Posted by dovie at 8:08 pm on Jan. 1, 2009 Am I supposed to critique the drawing? Okay, well, her legs need a bit more shape, to give some life to it. The leg that is holding all the body weight looks like a cylinder. Is that supposed to be a dress or a skirt? You should just be more detailed with it. The proportions are incorrect.