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-- Posted by Anonymous at 9:27 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
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-- Posted by Anonymous Chris at 9:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
I think love is a very easy word to use, it's just used to carelessly.
-- Posted by JeanClaude at 9:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
All you need is love
-- Posted by Total Destruction at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
That sounds so similar to something I would right and I enjoyed it quite a bit.
-- Posted by Anonymous at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Quote: from Anonymous Chris at 9:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
I think love is a very easy word to use, it's just used to carelessly.
I think that I meat difficult to be used correctly.
-- Posted by alastrxxna at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Yes, because love comes from your groin, not chemistry, or similar interests.
-- Posted by noraa at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Look: it's a good poem. But love poems have no meaning. Poetry should bring something NEW to the table.
-- Posted by Anonymous at 9:30 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Quote: from alastrxxna at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Yes, because love comes from your groin, not chemistry, or similar interests.
That's another reason I am surprised that I wrote it. Because I don't actual believe that it is central to lust and intimacy.
-- Posted by Soccerchik107 at 9:30 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
I really liked that =)
-- Posted by Anonymous at 9:32 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Quote: from NoNoNora383 at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
Look: it's a good poem. But love poems have no meaning. Poetry should bring something NEW to the table.
Thanks for the advice captain obvious. I said it was an old poem I found. I usually hate writing love poetry because I think that it is artificial. I usually write about various things.
-- Posted by mvmassacre at 9:33 pm on Dec. 29, 2008
I like it. It's really good!
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