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-- Posted by Anonymous at 9:27 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

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-- Posted by Anonymous Chris at 9:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

I think love is a very easy word to use, it's just used to carelessly.


-- Posted by JeanClaude at 9:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

All you need is love


-- Posted by Total Destruction at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

That sounds so similar to something I would right and I enjoyed it quite a bit.


-- Posted by Anonymous at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

Quote: from Anonymous Chris at 9:28 pm on Dec. 29, 2008


I think love is a very easy word to use, it's just used to carelessly.

I think that I meat difficult to be used correctly.


-- Posted by alastrxxna at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

Yes, because love comes from your groin, not chemistry, or similar interests.


-- Posted by noraa at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

Look: it's a good poem. But love poems have no meaning. Poetry should bring something NEW to the table.


-- Posted by Anonymous at 9:30 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

Quote: from alastrxxna at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008


Yes, because love comes from your groin, not chemistry, or similar interests.

That's another reason I am surprised that I wrote it.
Because I don't actual believe that it is central to lust and intimacy.



-- Posted by Soccerchik107 at 9:30 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

I really liked that =)


-- Posted by Anonymous at 9:32 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

Quote: from NoNoNora383 at 9:29 pm on Dec. 29, 2008


Look: it's a good poem. But love poems have no meaning. Poetry should bring something NEW to the table.

Thanks for the advice captain obvious.

I said it was an old poem I found.
I usually hate writing love poetry because I think that it is artificial.

I usually write about various things.


-- Posted by mvmassacre at 9:33 pm on Dec. 29, 2008

I like it.

It's really good!


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