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-- Posted by gapperdan at 6:44 am on Dec. 30, 2008
OK, so I haven't written any poetry for over 2 years now... and sat down earlier on and wrote this. I know it's not the best... but... comments? Who Is Me? Come and see what I can. When you are here, in this exact spot, You can see and hear all that I can. Your experiences may be like those I have, Yet you and I are not the same. These are the words I tell my future self, The person that I will become. Even if he were to travel on a time machine, Back to the Then that is Right Now, I am not my future self, and he is not me. We may have continuously shared The same time-space since forever, But the two of us are not the same. I will become you, but I am not you, You were once me, but you are me no longer.
-- Posted by Miss Vanity at 6:45 am on Dec. 30, 2008
Pretty good
-- Posted by katbabes at 6:47 am on Dec. 30, 2008
thats good :)
-- Posted by Imbetter at 6:53 am on Dec. 30, 2008
I like it.
-- Posted by gapperdan at 6:55 am on Dec. 30, 2008
Cheers guys! I know it's a bit philosophical and deep... but it was the first thing that came into my head.
-- Posted by blacksash7022 at 7:03 am on Dec. 30, 2008
Not bad I kind of like the approximate rhyme
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